I am Learning to add Detail to my Writing.

Room 8 has been learning how to add detail into our writing to make it more interesting. We can think about the questions: Who? What? Where? When? How? and Why? to help us add this detail.
We have recently started swimming again and chose this shared experience to write about.

On Friday we went swimming with the Year Twos. We did Jump Jam. We haven't been swimming in a long time. When I went in it was cold. When I was moving I felt more warm. We had free time in the water. It was a great day.

My Reflection

I think  that I did a fabulous job of my writing, but I was worried that I did not add enough detail. It can be hard to add detail because it is hard to think about them all. It is important to add detail to your writing because it tells more ideas and makes it more interesting.